tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post7665328955696280118..comments2024-03-15T15:26:03.987-05:00Comments on Melissa Maygrove: Campaign Challenge Entry #2Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comBlogger92125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-78899786805204533792012-03-16T16:39:18.308-05:002012-03-16T16:39:18.308-05:00Dark but beautiful - thanks for sharing!Dark but beautiful - thanks for sharing!kelworthfileshttp://kelworthfiles.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-56854699939115839912012-03-13T08:05:18.413-05:002012-03-13T08:05:18.413-05:00Thanks. I'm pretty blown away. Glad you stoppe...Thanks. I'm pretty blown away. <br>Glad you stopped by. = )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-66670963918467609862012-03-13T08:03:08.669-05:002012-03-13T08:03:08.669-05:00Thanks, Jessica.Thanks, Jessica.Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-23793334750924311552012-03-13T07:40:51.422-05:002012-03-13T07:40:51.422-05:00Congrats on moving on to the semi-finals. You dese...Congrats on moving on to the semi-finals. You deserve it. I agree with most of the commenters above... I want to know more.Tia Bachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-3082529227570882252012-03-12T15:58:55.162-05:002012-03-12T15:58:55.162-05:00Great job! I want to know more. What's the mom...Great job! I want to know more. What's the mom doing back and what's the kid?Jessica Salyerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00227752359369023249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-9147546307465521622012-03-12T06:22:17.278-05:002012-03-12T06:22:17.278-05:00Thank you. Maybe I will have to write the whole th...Thank you. Maybe I will have to write the whole thing after all. LOL Thanks for stopping by. ; )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-4145835919591153282012-03-12T06:21:24.510-05:002012-03-12T06:21:24.510-05:00Thanks. = )Thanks. = )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-34896630101276750082012-03-12T06:20:02.979-05:002012-03-12T06:20:02.979-05:00Again? Oh my gosh! I'm completely stunned.Than...Again? Oh my gosh! I'm completely stunned.<br>Thank you.Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-23491467649761044262012-03-12T01:26:58.727-05:002012-03-12T01:26:58.727-05:00That was very well written. It makes me want to kn...That was very well written. It makes me want to know more about the background, the characters and what might happen next.Treelighthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06112359944059755033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-17733635018132462792012-03-11T23:47:09.088-05:002012-03-11T23:47:09.088-05:00Very interesting! Great read.#46Very interesting! Great read.<br><br>#46The Capillaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17227930109298758072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-49216662530493325882012-03-11T18:03:41.346-05:002012-03-11T18:03:41.346-05:00Your campaign entry has been shortlisted and is no...Your campaign entry has been shortlisted and is now entered into the semi-finals. Congrats and good luck!!Nancy Thompsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-14902875495198818892012-03-11T15:06:59.248-05:002012-03-11T15:06:59.248-05:00Well done, Melissa...I like the mysterious twist a...Well done, Melissa...I like the mysterious twist at the end! I "liked" it. Thanks for the tip you left on my blog...Jarm Del Bocciohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16734893974122730211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-55502273724431508302012-03-11T03:02:30.605-05:002012-03-11T03:02:30.605-05:00Thanks, RaeAnn. = )Thanks, RaeAnn. = )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-86151096522896912862012-03-11T01:07:07.144-06:002012-03-11T01:07:07.144-06:00Ohhh...that wa still sad...and touching...That'...Ohhh...that wa still sad...and touching...That's why I love yours!!! "Like"RaeAnnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-3684830235606209812012-03-10T21:18:48.592-06:002012-03-10T21:18:48.592-06:00I love how you convey emotion. You have a light t...I love how you convey emotion. You have a light touch which makes the emotions of your characters run deep without becoming to melodramatic. Great job! :-)cbwentworthhttp://cbwentworth.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-73474938261620663252012-03-10T19:34:31.439-06:002012-03-10T19:34:31.439-06:00It could definitely go either way. And what a twis...It could definitely go either way. And what a twist it would be if it wasn't...but they thought it was for a while. ; )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-72747528539245607862012-03-10T19:32:53.118-06:002012-03-10T19:32:53.118-06:00Thanks, Susan. It was a tough chalenge.Thanks, Susan. It was a tough chalenge.Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-91226528098753883802012-03-10T19:31:54.077-06:002012-03-10T19:31:54.077-06:00Thanks, Samantha. = )Thanks, Samantha. = )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-56112856857935190762012-03-10T19:31:04.732-06:002012-03-10T19:31:04.732-06:00Thank you. And thanks for visiting. ; )Thank you. And thanks for visiting. ; )Melissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-58166144451028907672012-03-10T18:57:00.062-06:002012-03-10T18:57:00.062-06:00I liked it! It definitely caught my interest:) T...I liked it! It definitely caught my interest:) Thanks for your pointers on my post!Honeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-34859810759598514212012-03-10T14:39:21.291-06:002012-03-10T14:39:21.291-06:00Well, it would make me want to read more, for sure...Well, it would make me want to read more, for sure :-)Sarah Pearsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-73190786307544002112012-03-10T12:24:48.627-06:002012-03-10T12:24:48.627-06:00Oh, I get the feeling that's not really his mo...Oh, I get the feeling that's not really his mom--and that they're in danger.<br><br>Great entry!The Golden Eaglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-51729339104175641282012-03-10T11:46:42.922-06:002012-03-10T11:46:42.922-06:00Lots of emotions going on in your story - raw emot...Lots of emotions going on in your story - raw emotions at that. Very well written and great use of the promptsSusan Roebuckhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09186491465911432817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-52639797941302181192012-03-10T10:58:41.682-06:002012-03-10T10:58:41.682-06:00This is great! I could definitely see it being par...This is great! I could definitely see it being part of a series. I would read it :)<br><br>Samantha<br><a href="http://www.writingthroughcollege.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Writing Through College</a>Samanthahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09370961661054617338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3589035973172290745.post-5903376778211353072012-03-10T10:10:46.433-06:002012-03-10T10:10:46.433-06:00I agree with the dystopian feel of the prompts. I ...I agree with the dystopian feel of the prompts. I usually write children's and found it leaned towards dark writing, too. You did a good job with a difficult challenge. Write on! :)clarbojahnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08554871750348852894noreply@blogger.com